Monday, April 21, 2008

We've been edited!

We sent in our BM Letter as I mentioned a few posts back. Lane has already reviewed it and sent it back with his revisions. I think he must know my third grade teacher Mrs. Lopo-something, because the letter is covered in red. I thought I'd get all defensive when he sent it back, because I knew he'd edit it out but this much? Geez. After re-reading it I can see it does flow alot better now, and there definitely were some areas where we kind of repeated ourselves. I'd say it's about 75% there. We'll work on it some more and hopefully send it back to him by the end of next week.

Oh for clarification this was only the text part (or did I say that? I should really read this blog.) We're collecting the pictures for it, and Tricia is going to try to take our "main picture" when we all go camping on the first weekend of May. Hope it comes out good!

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